Wednesday, 6 February 2013

Jayme's colour Poem

Check out Jayme's Colour poem

When I am sad I'm blue like the tears that drip down my face like a waterfall
Blue is like the clear sky thats up in the air with the beautiful sun.
I am blue like the clear water thats in the cool lakes.
I am a waterfall with blue water going down with a splash.
Blue is like the colour of our eyes.
our eyes glow because of the blue.
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3 comments:

  1. D Mossop7 February 2013 at 18:16

    Nice one Jayme, my favourite part is line about tears that drip down my face.

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  2. Anonymous20 February 2013 at 20:51

    nice jayme from lily

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  3. Unknown25 February 2013 at 20:57

    This is a nice poem Jayme.
    Good work.
    Celine

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