Those metaphor poems are brilliant! Here's my try...
Joy wears pyjamas and a sun hat with little waving hands attached to it. Joy is married to Happiness and they live in many places, but you do have to look to find them. Her best friends are Kindness and Aroha. She always smiles first even to the face of Rage and Sadness. Her only enemy is Old Father Time.
Those metaphor poems are brilliant! Here's my try...
ReplyDeleteJoy wears pyjamas and a sun hat with little waving hands attached to it. Joy is married to Happiness and they live in many places, but you do have to look to find them. Her best friends are Kindness and Aroha. She always smiles first even to the face of Rage and Sadness. Her only enemy is Old Father Time.
Sean Irvine
We really enjoyed your poem it had some facts, nice description like 'Joy wears pyjamas...'
DeleteWhat does Old Father Time mean?